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the right to development, the right to self-determination and the right to dispose of natural
resources.
Annex III
List of concrete suggestions
Annex IV contains the concrete oral and written suggestions, where specific languages
were proposed on the revised text of the Declaration (A/HRC/WG.15/4/2) presented by the
Chair-Rapporteur at the 4th session of the working group by member states and other
participants. This document needs to be read in conjunction with the general and other
comments included in the body of the present report.
Text in bold indicates a proposal to add new text. Struck-through text indicates a proposal
to delete text. Struck-through text immediately followed by text in bold indicates a proposal
to replace the struck-through text with the bold text. Text shown in curly brackets indicates
a request to delete the entire text. Text in square brackets indicates an expression of
reservation to it. A number of additional comments are indicated (when verbatim, they are
indicated with “<” and >”).
Preamble
IUF, comment:
<We would like to see a more comprehensive reference to the ILO and its instrument back
in the preamble in the same form as the reference in the current draft to the FAO.>
Golay, expert: suggested that reference to ILO conventions should be made in the preamble
and that the specific language be added in the body of the declaration.
Preambular paragraph 1:
EU
PP1. Wishing Acknowledging to promote the realization of the principles proclaimed in
the Charter of the United Nations, the Universal Declaration of Human Rights, the
International Convention on the Elimination of All Forms of Racial Discrimination, the
International Covenant on Civil and Political Rights, the International Covenant on
Economic, Social and Cultural Rights, the Convention on the Elimination of All Forms of
discrimination against Women, the Declaration on the Right to Development, the
Convention on the Protection of the Rights of all Migrant Workers and Members of Their
Families and the Convention on the Rights of the Child, and other relevant international
instruments that have been adopted at the universal or regional level,
ILO
PP1. Wishing to promote the realization of the principles proclaimed in the Charter of the
United Nations, the Universal Declaration of Human Rights, the International Convention
on the Elimination of All Forms of Racial Discrimination, the ICCPR, the International
Covenant on Economic, Social and Cultural Rights, the Convention on the Elimination of
All Forms of discrimination against Women, the Declaration on the Right to Development,
the ILO Declaration on Fundamental Principles and Rights at Work, the ILO
Declaration on Social Justice for a Fair Globalization, the Convention on the Protection
of the Rights of all Migrant Workers and Members of Their Families and the Convention
on the Rights of the Child, and other relevant international instruments that have been
adopted at the universal or regional level,
Preambular paragraph 3:
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